Online Learning - Sentence Styles

This week for our Daily Writing Challenges we have been learning how to use the Explore the Subject and Em-Dash Sentence Styles. These sentences change up our writing and make it interesting for the reader.

Check out some great examples of these sentences from students writing this week.

Walter, who is a racoon, likes to explore. - Written By Makiya.

Walter and his family, who are going on a road trip together, are all racoons. - Written by Keela.

Walter, an adventurous little racoon, who always got into trouble. - Written by Olie.

Walter, who is a local sports star in Timaru, gets paid to play rugby league for New Zealand. - Written by Monique. 

Walter, who loves playing the guitar, was in the back of the car. - Written by Boraq.

Walter is not known to be very good at driving, mostly because he’s a racoon, in fact his whole family are racoons. - Written by Luke.

I am complaining about my wet fur—sodden and about to get hypothermia—it is most disturbing and cold. - Written by Makiya.

I mean you Ashley—so careless and selfish—took me out in the rain and thought it was a good idea. - Written by Holly.

My owner—a moron—thought a leaf was going to not make me get wet. - Written by Boraq.

My owner Jason—forgetful and doubtful—forgot to check the weather report before taking me for a walk, again. - Written by Ash.